Night Jelly

Painting \ Nature | 04/27/08 @070 | Nir0x | critiques (3) | views (249)

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This started out as just a cloud experiment (I'm trying to improve my clouds) but I love jelly fish... and there you have it.

I am always looking to improve... C&C welcomed!

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chickenfingers

04/28/08 @157

Dig the minimalism and dreamlike mystery of this, but I think a less centralized composition would be a good choice. We'd get a better sense of the way the jellyfish is moving, in addition to it providing more interest. Love the subtle color changes and out of focus clouds. Another minor detail: maybe rework some of the, umm, ribs of the jellyfish membrane to make their curving more natural.

Madanapale

04/28/08 @731

Nice work!....agree with Kerry.
Carlos

purplerose

05/01/08 @302

Can't go wrong with jellyfish.

Less central composition would be good.

+8

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